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    On Landing Pages and CTAs

    Landing pages and CTAs that convert are tough to get right. They can be especially challenging if you collaborate with a large team with many specialists and opinions. As a digital marketer you will encounter this issue. This post addresses the problems and what to look for in solving them.

    You have the perfect campaign in mind. You have thought about your audience. Have described your goal, objective, strategy and the tactics you think you want to use. Everyone is on board it seems. It’s go time

    But wait a second. The landing page for the campaign ends up in the middle of a fierce debate. There are opposing views over the main objective of the page – even though you may have agreed on it in previous campaign discussions. There may even be confusion around the key performance indicators (KPI) and debate at what stage (Awareness, Consideration or Decision) the campaign is in.

    No matter how well you plan, when it comes to the tactics, sometimes consensus gets lost on how we want to meet the customer. This can often be mitigated by thorough briefs outlining your goal, objective, and strategy which should inform tactics. But sometimes there are factors and opinions outside of your control. How then, do you go about it when your marketing team is involved with bringing traffic to the landing page? What input should you offer? This question becomes especially important if you are going to put significant spend behind the page to drive traffic. And that’s where we should start.

    Traffic shouldn’t be a KPI on your ad landing pages.

    Nope. There is only one exception. If the page is only being created to drive organic traffic, of course traffic matters. Do your SEO checks and let her rip. But if it’s a paid ads page, traffic doesn’t matter one bit. Because if you are paying for traffic, you could have the smiling poop emoji as the featured element on the page and you would still receive the same amount of traffic. You are paying for it. You created an ad and are promising a great page experience. The poop emoji probably did NOT deliver, but there was traffic. So, no matter what, you will get traffic. It’s what the traffic does once it’s there.

    KPIs that do matter

    If your site speed is good on both mobile and desktop, then you can include/look at overall engagemnt rate. But really, you should be focusing on what the traffic does once it’s there. So even in an awareness campaign, you should focus on conversions, or actions you want to help guide the user to naturally, and of course, engagement. If you are prospecting for instance, is the CTA to share their email strong and sensible? Is there a value in users sharing their email, or are you trying to strong arm them into sharing the email so you can report that “Yes, we are generating prospects!” Don’t forget that humans are engaging with your content – think about the last time you shared an email address with a company. What compelled you to do it?

    Look closely at the page you are creating and have one outcome in mind. Make sure you have stripped out navigation. Although you don’t want to “trap” a user on the page, you want to minimize distractions. Your company logo, for instance could lead to the website, or a smaller, less noticeable (secondary CTA) could be situated so that if the user doesn’t feel like becoming a prospect they can head into your site’s wild expanse. But send them somewhere logical – and tell them where you are sending them – and why.

    Your landing page won’t work without a compelling CTA

    If you create a landing page and then place a button that says “Subscribe” or a “Learn More” don’t expect a great outcome. Unless your offer is free gold, you have got to give your user a reason to take the action you wish them to take.

    Many think a simple actionable verb will compel a user to comply, but in the real world, users don’t hand out their email address for just any reason. Today’s consumer is wary and protective of their inbox so you have to make an offer that makes it very, very worth it to them. And this is not easy. Be sure to have content of value to share. Copy that converts, or conversion copy, is an art and genre in and of itself in the copywriting world. Think it through. You might also want to tell them what to expect once they share their info.

    This article on conversion copywriting will get you headed in the right direction. I also like its Awareness, Consideration, Decision breakdown of campaign stages.

    Here is a great way to start creating a CTA that works by Eden Bidani, a conversion copy expert. I would recommend following her on LinkedIn.

    Ad Traffic is a completely different animal than organic traffic

    This sometimes seems to confuse folks. Remember that ad traffic is completely different than organic. Ad traffic has been lured off the internet to your page. They had no intention to end up there that day, you pulled them in and promised a good time. A way to think about it is that your ads are a carnival barker on an extremely busy street promising people the right experience if they venture inside your “foyer.” Whether they were looking (search) or were intrigued enough to enter (display, video, discovery, PMax etc.). It’s likely they may not even know who you are. And, again, be sure you give them what you promised.

    Organic traffic, on the other hand, arrived there on purpose with stronger intent. Not that organic pages are being let off the hook, but paid landing pages are designed with strangers in mind. This can be a difficult change when you have a feel for your audience and have designed pages in the past for that audience. Landing pages and CTAs throw a lot of what you may know about your audience out the window. Expect to reach a mostly new audience, who again, have no loyalty or reason to trust you and were also not necessarily expecting to be there today. Be prepared to adjust to their needs.

    After the launch

    Watch those GA4 results and pay attention to engagement (you may need to adjust the default of 10 seconds), scrolls (default 90% but with Google Tag Manager you can set different depths), and clicks. Understand where they are going and again, adjust as necessary. Always follow the data.

    One of the hardest projects to initiate is after everyone has worked really hard to get a landing page and a secondary page in place to find out they are not working as expected. Nobody wants to go back to it, but if you set a date, say a month after launch to follow up and share findings, let folks know ahead of time that changes may have to be made. We also talk about A/B testing in an upcoming post.

    BTW — Landing pages and CTAs are hard

    But don’t despair! A little thought and care when creating landing pages and CTAs will take a lot of the guesswork out of it. Remember; know what your goal is, design the page solely for the goal, focus the traffic on the goal, and leave them an out if they decide they don’t want to take you up on your primary offer. If they aren’t biting, go back to rework or take the time to create a better, more compelling CTA. Don’t be afraid to experiment. A colleague who played with conversion rates on his landing pages found that a certain color of green (which had nothing to do with the brand’s usual colors) converted at double the usual rate. Why? No idea why that particular green worked so well. Remember, people are weird (that includes you).

    You never know what your audience will respond to. This is another reason to be willing to experiment with your CTAs and other elements on the page. Which will be the subject of another post; being open to experiments and how to do them.

    Reach out to DemandWeb for help in consulting or setting up landing pages that convert for your business

    Best of luck and bon marketing!

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    Paul Warner (link leads to LI Profile) is heavily involved in digital marketing, advertising and analytics. Also loves to make music.

  • Lullaby

    Lullaby

    Listen to “Lullaby”

    Lullaby came together pretty quickly in comparison to most tracks that sit in the mixing process indefinitely. I decided to keep the track simple enough that I couldn’t muck the song up (I tend to start overdeveloping songs until they are no longer fun or lose the original energy) and left it pretty much as when it first came together. Scroll down for lyrics. Hope you enjoy!

    BANDCAMP

    I was listening to the song and heard a few technical issues to fix. This is an updated version and one that seems to have more and more relevance. Whenever you are feeling stuck or misunderstood, take solace that everything is temporary. We never know what to expect and when life doesn’t go the way we expected, it can be hard to move on. If you are reading this during a difficult time in your life, my hope is it offers a little warmth and comfort.

    Also listen to: Put It Down

    LYRICS:
    Lullaby
    We’re drowning in slow-mo
    With nowhere else to go
    Never thought it wrong
    It’s time to move along

    Well, hold on tight
    It’ll be a ride

    Oh restless and afraid
    Didn’t think life goes that way
    Take a deep breath and you’ll see
    All the places you should be

    Hold on tight
    It’ll be a ride
    Hold on tight
    It’ll be all right

    Hold on tight
    It’ll be a ride
    Hold on tight
    It’ll be all right

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  • Pronouns in Marketing

    Pronouns in Marketing

    How far would you be willing to go in this post if I started with: “At demandwebmktg.com, we are great copywriters, our team is creative, we are fantastic digital marketers…and we are very customer-focused?” (Aren’t we all?)

    Your reader/customer has also read it all and is likely resistant to ads, so why are so many still addicted to using we, our and the company name in their copy? (I mean look at that guy in the picture above. Do you trust him? Because that is what it sounds like when you talk about yourself.) Especially when you and I are trying to connect with a potential customer. Do you really think your visitors only came to read about how great you are? Or do you think they are trying to see if you understand their pain points and have the ability to solve them?

    I have been obsessed with copywriting lately. And hopefully you will find this article beneficial. This wasn’t going to get published, but, I happened upon this conversion copywriter’s post yesterday and read number 9. So, it was a sign. Let’s do this.

    Some Context

    As a former journalist, making copy and headlines that would interest and engage the reader was the goal. Heeding the call to “Hemingway” the copy, -yes, Hemingway was used as a verb – editing and surfacing the salient points immediately was paramount. We lived or died by clicks. Not clickbait. The byline needed to shout, “Trust me, this is gonna be good.” With this approach readers engaged. Dominating the top fold with heds, articles and byline was life.

    But really close attention to pronouns happened after becoming editor and reading submitted ad copy. What worked? What didn’t? Most ads were bad because of braggadocio, hyperbole and overuse of first person.

    So the ads accomplished what they were “supposed” to do – promote themselves. But the ones that connected were squarely aimed at the reader. The rare, successful ad flipped it – with a good idea of who they were reaching. Now, not every ad that attempted to focus on the reader and address pain points was brilliant. Some were good, some were ok and some were terrible. But what was obvious was the ad that used traditional first person sounded like, well, an ad, while ads that attempted something beyond the usual “we” copy was more intriguing.

    And More Context

    So when I left journalism for marketing – my colleagues called it going to the dark side haha – creating engaging copy was the goal. And it definitely helped with social media and PPC. But content on most websites and even landing pages was interestingly controlled by leadership and the writing team. And the writing team, perhaps fearful for their jobs, often wrote what was dictated to them.

    While puzzling, I get it. So hopefully at some point you can share an example to get your point across. Think of it this way. You go to a party. The first person you meet looks good and seems interesting but all they say is, “I’m the best. I’m popular. or, I’m better than anyone else you’re going to meet.” That’s how “we” “our” etc. comes across to the customer.

    Contrast that with the party goer who stops and takes the time to ask you, “How are you doing?” “What’s going on with you?” “What do you want to do next?” That person seems genuinely interested in who you are, and attempting to understand and connect with you.

    So, who would you rather hang with?

    Pronouns Matter – Copywriters agree

    How does this sound to your ear?

    “We are customer-focused”

    Versus:

    “Your needs are the focus of 24/7 customer service.” (Just pretend this is awesome copy for a minute – you get the picture)

    “We are…” is claimed by a lot of companies. Consequently, “we” and “our” gets this reaction:

    “Oh, really? Every company says that. Who cares! “

    Your customers are interested in themselves. They want to read about what your services/products can do for them.

    As one copywriter wrote: “The truth is no one cares about you.”

    By squarely placing the reader as the subject of the copy, it connects so much better. In one instance, by getting rid of we, our, mentions of the company name and tamping down hard on purely promotional content, a social media account tripled engagement in a month or so. (Subject of a future post?)

    But don’t just take my word for it – read what actual copy experts say. (Article: The Only Time to Use the Word “We” in Web Copywriting)

    Also here. (Secrets to Use Pronouns in Copywriting and Boost Marketing Results)

    And here. (Conversational Copy – Using Personal Pronouns)

    For those who prefer video. (Rhodes Law Website Copywriting Analysis)

    Every marketing copywriter advocates for limited use of first person pronouns with few exceptions, like the “we promise” example. I liked that.

    So why do we still do it?

    One reason is because a lot of copy is written by committee. Which is unfortunately how a lot of marketing is done these days. I suspect that there is a a real concern that if we don’t refer to ourselves, the reader might not understand who we are talking about – and how obviously great we are.

    Even though the copy is on our website. Or on our social. On our video. On a branded paper…

    So, no one thinks we’re referring to our competitors! Yet, the first person persists.

    Another more Occam’s Razor explanation is simply being unaware. I might call this lazy writing, but that might be, well, lazy. So maybe you don’t even realize you are doing it. Until you read “we” copy on a website that isn’t yours. And think, “Wow, these guys really think it’s all about them. Followed quickly by, “Uh oh, wait a second…” (And hopefully not with, “See, everyone else is doing it!”)

    So even if your copy is currently riddled with “we” “our” and company mentions, at least you are aware of it now and can start to advocate for change in the future.

    And you can do it! In addition if you are not (in your mind) a writer and would like to learn more, I suggest following Ann Handley. She also has a very helpful book available called Everybody Writes. And yes, everybody can, and/or improve their writing.

    For help with your content, contact DemandWeb – ‘we’ haha can help you.

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  • Sunset Sky – M1

    Sunset Sky – M1

    Sunset Sky is the name. M1 is the latest track.

    Sunset Sky worked out perfectly. Approximately 99.9% of the photos I take are of the sky and sunset. So…

    The Sunset Sky music site is live – not finished, but live.

    M1 references a supernova remnant and the track is a moody electronic drive deep into the dark night. Get behind the wheel and let yourself go.

    Bandcamp link

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    Sunset Sky M1
    Sunset Sky – M1
    M1 is one of those tracks that straddle the line between wanting to dance, listen or just… drive.

    I wanted to create a track that just allowed the listener to be. Or even take you somewhere far away. It is winding a road into the sky. I hope I succeeded.

    M1 by Sunset Sky on YouTube
    M1 Lyrics

    easing into the warm night

    nothing ever feels so right

    yes i like it

    I like it

    thinking about all you said 

    playing with thoughts in my head

    and i like it 

    i like it

    no answers here

    just the silence

    the stars have seen — everything

    only witness to our nighttime scenes

    the nightscape falls in time

    shadows obscure all our crimes

    and i like it

    i like it

    moonlight sweeping outside rooms

    washing midnight sins from you

    and i like it

    oh i like it

    no answers here

    just the silence

    the stars have seen — everything

    just remember we’re a blip on the screen

    where are we now

    are we now

    are we now

    we’ll wake up some other day instead

    (were we ever here before

    i don’t remember anymore

    we can ask the skies above

    are the stars your only love)

    where are we now

    are we now

    are we now

    we’ll wake up some other day instead

    Thank you for visiting. Leave a comment. Or reach out for help on your tracks!

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  • 2AM — a new dance song

    2AM — a new dance song

    2AM is a dance song. Pure and simple with a twist of anxiety mixed in. Anxiety. I love it.

    The Sunset Sky music site is live – not finished, but live.

    Every now and then I wake up in the middle of the night and think about things – too much. I have no idea why. It doesn’t always happen, but enough that I wanted to write a dance song about it. In the middle of the night, there is nothing you can do and the worry seems so needless, yet so important. The funny thing is, whatever is being obsessed over can usually be resolved during the day, but your brain wants it resolved RIGHT now and goes over and over every single option. Drives me nuts. Here’s the track – it’s a good one.

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    2AM

    Dance song 2AM is one of the best tracks I’ve put together. I’m getting more proficient at mixing and mastering. I’m still learning the ins and outs of proper compression and there are some EQ issues that crop up, but for the most part the tracks are starting to sound more polished. I just make one or two stupid mistakes on each, rather than the usual myriad.

    2Am by Sunset Sky on YouTube

    Dance Song 2AM – Lyrics

    it seems like 2am

    don’t ask just who i am

    or even what it means to me

    it feels so wrong i cannot think

    here i am at night

    it doesn’t feel so right

    the voice inside my head will

    never die down stay still

    im up at 2am again

    i cannot think at all

    why the fuck am i here

    what is going on

    deep into the sky

    I stop wondeting why

    the sun will be up soon enough

    and the racing thoughts might die

    when the dawn comes up 

    I pretend the ghosts aren’t there

    go about the day like

    well i really dont care

    im up at 2am again

    i cannot think at all

    why the fuck am i here

    what is going on

    i cannot sleep anymore

    toss and turn all night

    it’s all on my mind baby

    what the hell is life

    please call administration

    i can’t handle this

    goin down in flames

    sweating through the tears

    over and over why cant i stop thinking

    i have to ask do you ever sleep at all

    because if i’m only dreaming…

    can you or will you catch my fall

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